Hello Preet Malcolm ,

How are you doing? Thanks for sharing your story with us. This review is for "a very Wodehouse challenge" .

Ultron 5000 sounds pretty cool! I do think there might be a point in the future where technology advances to the point of saving memories and transferring them to another entity when we die. It seems far off, but really, our memories live through technology anyway. So many people pass and all of their thoughts remain behind on the internet.

I'd say this is about the worst possible time for a critical failure! What happens when the unsaved files are lost? Does Mr. Goldstein still have those memories since he is still technically alive, though elderly? These are the questions I found myself asking while reading your story.

I think the concept is interesting and I think there are many things you could do with the concept of the story. I'd like to see it fleshed out a bit more so we can see the aftermath of the system freezing and what kind of backup they have for that in a future where this is even a possibility.

Let me know if you ever decide to edit or expand on this so I can give it another look!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .