Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating ,

Thanks for sharing your poem with us. This review is part of "a very Wodehouse challenge" .

How did I miss this news story? This is so interesting. I love the direction you took this poem as though the sun is sharing its secrets with us through a solar song. I love the poetic devices used here. I feel like I can use all my senses to hear this humming, feel the warmth, and see the sun. Plus, who doesn't want to share secrets with the sun?

It's cool that this discovery was made and can explain things like solar flares. You did a good job of including scientific information from the article in a poetic way. One thing I would point out is that there's a typo in the second line: in frequencies to low
Should be in frequencies too low.

Thanks again for the interesting read!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .