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Mad Boy's Love Song  [ASR]
A villanelle about my serious obsession - sorry, Sylvia!
by Christopher Roy Denton
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Dear Mad Boy,

Don't tell everyone, or I'll be out of a job -- but -- I agree. There is no better love than chocolate, and anyone who is pretending so is fooling themselves.

Thanks for giving the link to the original poem, I wasn't familiar with it before.

It gave me a laugh to see 'food'as the predominant genre, then 'love' -- you have your priorities right, Mad Boy! *Laugh*

The only thing I might change is the word 'cruelty', it sits sort of heavy in this otherwise light-but-serious poem. (I know people can be really mean, but 'cruel' takes it to the next level.)

Chocolate on.

With L*Suitheart*VE,
Cupid.

(Or Stupid-Cupid, as some folk would say.)

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