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 Writers Block  [E]
Frustration at its finest
by Tmtsaturn
Review of Writers Block  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Writers Block"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: I appreciate the thoughts portrayed in this poem.

*BurstP* THE POEM: This is a poem about frustration and its bad effects. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. The little rhythm poem flowed beautifully. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind. I like the lines “A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me".

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I enjoyed it reading.

Keep writing!!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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