What a lovely poem you have here. I love the title and I love how you open the mystery of you in every line! Very creative, clever, unique, a one of kind of poem for sure. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end.
I did not see any errors at all the flow was really good and easy to read and understand. Keep writing and sharing! I love that you showed which made me feel more than you just told and I can picture you and feel like I may know you just a little better now!
I give your wonderful poem a 5-star rating.

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