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Review by Mina~
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION:This is indeed a good poem about life and so inspiring.

*BurstP* THE POEM: The poem has positive messages. I like the thoughts evokes in this poem.

*BurstP* RHYME: The poem has good rhyming scheme. It floated beautifully.

*BurstP* FAVORITE: you have to get up when you fall
help out others when you can
lessons make you a better man

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I appreciate the way you wrote this.

I enjoyed it reading. Keep writing!!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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