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 ~ the black raven ~  [E]
... mortality's truth
by Tweety-Bird218
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "~ the black raven ~"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

I like this shape poem about a black raven. You used beautifully the symbol and images. The poem packed with message.

The narratives are great. I like the phrases “father-time please, a moment to sketch”.

I like the first stanza “Intelligent
cunning, resilient and bold
too swift to catch, too fast to behold”

I enjoyed it reading.

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