Good evening! I found this in the read and review section and I was really drawn in by the title and your description and as I began to read I found a funny, charming, delightful, unique, and very creative poem. And I do have to say that I love the image that you have at the bottom of this funny poem. I really did enjoy it from the beginning to the very end and I even read it a second time just to laugh once again. I did not see any errors in your poem at all. You sure do have a way with words and you know just how to draw your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see. Keep writing and keep sharing. I would have given your poem a five-star rating had you allowed ratings.



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