Good evening. I found your little start of a story and I was drawn in by the title and by the description. I like how this is going so far as you drawn me with your cleverly creative story that you have going on in here. You have a way with words as you weave your web drawling me in as your story unfolds and I can see the picture in which you have clearly creative here. I look forward to seeing where this story is going and what happens next. You are really talented and I enjoyed so far. I did not see any errors at all, great job. Keep writing and keep sharing. I am giving your WIP story a three and half star rating.

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