I just read a your story. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Flowers"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

FIRST IMPRESSION:It’s really a wonderful write. It is emotional and has nice rhythm. You paint wonderfully a flawed character. The breaks and spaces and the fonts are appropriate.

DIALOGUES: You used it beautifully the prompt "What are we going to do with all these flowers?" in your story. The narratives are rich. You have good descriptions.

I've read some of the story of yours and I thought they are really beautiful. I like the dialogues. They floated normally between the characters and I could imagine the scenes where they were.

CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Sonja”. You crafted her so beautifully.

SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I enjoyed it reading.
Mina


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