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September Dance  [E]
Based On a Musical Newsfeed Challenge
by ♥Hooves♥
Review of September Dance  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "September Dance"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like way you crafted words with the 48 hours media prompt challenge.. The poem expressed beautifully the poet’s feelings of Justin song "Can't Stop the Feeling!". The poet wrote “A dream of you and happy dancing
Me in white, your wife, entrancing”.

I find the lovely thoughts inside the lines. The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “September dance” fits this poem. I like the lines “throwing roses into the rain
never knowing that love may one day bring pain”

I enjoyed it reading.

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