*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4503738
Review #4503738
Viewing a review of:
 Sail On  [E]
I was born to sail the seas
by Norman
Review of Sail On  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Sail On on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like the story of a sailor and the way you crafted his story. The words expressed the feelings of the sailors and their life in the sea.

The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “the Sail on” fits this poem. The blue fonts is appropriate.

The punctuation marks gives this poem an extra flavor.

I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
*Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass**Grass*

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **

   *CheckG* You responded to this review 09/11/2019 @ 8:24am EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4503738