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Given: Sep 11, 2019 at 6:30am
Length: 835 Characters |
600 w/o WritingML
Hi!
It's been a pleasure to review your story "Sail On" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I like the story of a sailor and the way you crafted his story. The words expressed the feelings of the sailors and their life in the sea.
The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “the Sail on” fits this poem. The blue fonts is appropriate.
The punctuation marks gives this poem an extra flavor.
I enjoyed it reading.
Mina
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