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 The Impetus for Creation  [ASR]
The reason the Universe exist
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Good poem. I like the words and the way you wrote it with a rhyme scheme of aabccb & a syllable count of 7, 3, 7, 7, 3, 7. Love is a compassion, a feeling of hears. But nowadays true love decreasing. I love the lines "Without love! There is no light
only night"

You truly express your feelings through this poem. I like the simplicity and the rhymes.
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