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This is neat for a short FF piece, and I like the way you used the prompt words to come up with something like this! Not only do I believe that conversation is one you’re going to be hearing a lot more of from now on, but I think this could be expanded on into a larger story. Perhaps a children’s story—I’m thinking like that mouse family, The Littles, or something like that?
It would indeed be a little strange to lift a rug and find yourself ‘eavesdropping’ on a mouse meeting! Whatever could they be ‘meeting’ about? Is it an uprising? Perhaps a plan to raid your refrigerator? The possibilities are endless!
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and may your day be filled with wonder and merriment!

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