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 My Friend Claire has no Hair  [E]
A very silly poem I wrote for one of the poetry contests.
by R. Engels
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

It's been a pleasure to review your story "My Friend Claire has no Hair"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,
This is a wonderful piece. I appreciate the simplicity and humorous touch of this epic poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful and soothing. And I love the way you crafted words.

My favorite lines
Well, that's my friend, Claire, who has no hair.
You can point, tease, laugh, and stare.
But guess what? She doesn't care.

Thank you for sharing your work!

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