I’m reviewing this as a "The WDC Angel Army" Angel and to thank you for all the reviews you do on this site! Howdy, PureSciFi, and happy early 5th 'birthday' on here! This isn't bad, but it seemed a little simple. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with that, but other than the tombstone speaking to the kids and scaring them bejeesus out of them, it fell a little flat, at least in my opinion (for what that's worth). I know you had word limit, and I know these 300 word FFs aren't easy, so I can't really fault you there. You did a good job with the prompt words though. Niggles:
“That wasn’t a real Gillin(,) was it,”
“Let’s go (to) another supposedly haunted house.”
"Watch were you are going,” (where) Kee ponw ritin gon, PureSciFi, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.22 seconds at 3:43am on Apr 18, 2024 via server web2.