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Review by Mina~
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,

I like this story written with three hundred words. The story has other characters, alien life and some creatures like a women with a long neck and a man with a skinny body and chubby feet who hold an important role to the party.

I appreciate the simplicity and the ending. I think and you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I enjoyed it reading.

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