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Review of Breath of Spring  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Gita!

I just read your poem. It's been a pleasure to review your poem on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . You paint beautifully the enchanted picture of spring nature. The green fonts you used is appropriate. Here in my country we don’t have snow either. Here spring has decreased, on the other hand, winter, summer and rainy seasons have increased. I think it is because for the weather pattern changing. Spring is the season of rebirth . It is the time of flowers, bees, butterflies, a season of color, scents and the sound.

I feel this poem is simple, positive. I like the lines” While this exquisite scene I view, entranced,
a nudge of warmth reminds me it won't last.”

It has nice rhythm.

I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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