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I like this story about Oscar the octopus. You painted beautifully the daily adventures of him. It's a beautiful poem for the children. I appreciate the simplicity of this poem. I especially like the rhyming of this poem. My favorite lines are “Oscar the Octopus likes it under the sea
For him life is just full of glee”

I enjoyed it reading.

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