Guten tag, Hullabaloo! This is really, really good! I love how you combined the graveyard and the pumpkin patch prompts, and having those unearthly (or very earthly, since they were coming from the ground!) ghouls take their own harvest of the villagers was excellent! Very well told, and that ending was perfect!
Comments and suggestions:'In some places, pieces of orange flesh still dangled, witness to the ferocity of the harvest.' (great line!)
'their entire crop of pumpkins were gone' (was-you were referring to the 'crop', which is singular) Great job, Hullabaloo! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for entering The "'SCREAMS!!!' HALLOWEEN CONTEST!" , and I hope you enter again next year! PS-I'm still in the process of reading and judging the stories, but I should have the winners and Honorable Mentions posted later today or tomorrow!
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