Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Hi Jenae, This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with anxiety when Delia doubts her and her companions will find their way back to where they started off. The reader is wondering if she is right and will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your plot and main characters very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention: 1)Then again if-There should be a comma after "again". The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.
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