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Review #4523510
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I Write In 2020  [E]
This book contains prose writings and poetry for various contests here on WDC.
by 💙 Carly
         Review for entry/chapter: "Prescient Warnings
Review of I Write In 2020  
Review by Tinker
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Carly, Give me a moment, I have to look up "prescient". *Wink* I really did have to look it up. Sometimes these 24 syllable prompt words are really tough. In my opinion, this was one of the tougher ones. I'm following you at I Write and here I am to review.

My first impression has already stated above. Tough prompt, challenge accepted. It is this kind of word that sends me scurrying away. Congratulations courageous one. I'm not sure anyone could make "prescient" sound poetic. Now I feel challenged, but I may be out of time.

Being a 24 syllable challenge, of course, I count the syllables. At first count I got 25. Then i thought I had better listen to the word prescient which I counted as 3 syllables and you were right, in sound it is only 2 syllables.

The surprise phrase was "our us" at the end of L2. I thought "our" brought depth and changed a cliche to something to ponder.

Good job with this one.


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