Hello ruwth ,

As a co-participant in "I Write in 2020" , it is my pleasure to review your contest entry.


Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
The title set the mood going in and the words that followed did not disappoint, not one bit.
A very emotional poem and hopefully it will make people think a little before they callously snub an unfortunate.

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):
You did such a remarkable job utilizing the eight prompt word in so few lines!
And the truly amazing thing is that it doesn't feel forced at all. The words in this poem flow naturally that I didn't realize you had to follow certain guidelines until I read your footnote at the end.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
none noted

Closing Comments:
Keep writing, Ruwth - and we will keep reading!
Another moving entry in the books!




Thank you for sharing your work.
Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. I look to see how the piece makes me feel and if I can I visualize the story/poem in my head. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .