Hi, Odessa Molinari , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "I Write in 2020" .

First thoughts: The first stanza of this romantic poem made me laugh and drew me into the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and moves the humor and emotions of love forward at a good pace.

I like: The last two line are my favorite because the show a love that remained strong through years of tests.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh.








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