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At The Royal Ball  [E]
The royals at the royal ball. A 24 syllable contest entry
by BlueJay
Review of At The Royal Ball  
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, BlueJay,

As a co-participant in "I Write in 2020, it is my pleasure to review your contest entry.

24 Syllables is one of my favorite contests. It's fun to be introduced to new words with every prompt and I love to see all the different directions each writer takes the prompt.

When I saw the prompt word, debonair, I couldn't do anything with it. I was stuck with the image the word brought into my mind and it blocked creativity, lol.

Your entry is outstanding! Between the verse and the image, the reader is fully entertained. Not only is your poem a perfect twenty-four syllables, but it also rhymes!

Thank you for sharing your work with us! I look forward to reading more!

Kindest Regards, Lilli



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