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Review #4541313
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 The Attic  [ASR]
a short ghost story, written for a contest.
by spidey
Review of The Attic  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there spidey,

I would add the genre of "Tragedy" to this. It's well written, clean, no problems I came across. The imagery was vivid, the emotions much more. I felt my heart go out to this girl by the end of the story. This means you've captured your reader, great job.

Regards,
Lilliy



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