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Hello there!

This is my personal view of the piece. The suggestions below and purely that: suggestions.

*Penw* Impression:
What a fun read! I love how you developed so much culture behind it! I thoroughly enjoyed it and it gave me quite a few giggles here and there. Well done!

*Penw* Structure:
Neat. I like the Messenger.

*Penw* Favourite(s):
"We anthros are the only ones who are able to think that, multiplying and killing off our young to accommodate for the loss of nutrients."

"More meat, fewer veggies."

"Expensive carrots in Bunny Ville. Splendid."

"FartBook" *Rolling*

"“Eat the frog, Bon-Bon. Eat the frog.”"

*Penw* Suggestions:
"first-ever Easter Bunny to have ever"
"And even most Especially Bunny Rights"

Write on and prosper!

Cheers,
Lilliy

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