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Corrections/Suggestions

*NoteW* First impressions- This blog is nice and inviting when you come in to the first, main page of it. Your blog entry has a clear, distinct voice and it's easy to read. I do have a suggestion for your entry though when I was reading it. It's not exactly a typo, or error issue, but rather a reading one with the text.

*NoteO* One thing though, it may be me and my bad eyes (I do wear glasses) but the italics and the brown front was very hard to read for the entry. I found myself squinting to pick up the words and had a hard time reading it. I would suggest maybe changing to black or a darker color if you want to use a colored text. And then the italics just using it sparingly.

*Heart*Things Which I Enjoyed
I feel like I have been shrouded in a dismal winter...a season of unwriting, I might say.

I can get that feeling where it's like a dismal winter. I really enjoyed your blogging voice with this blog post, your honesty and what you shared with us. I'm so sorry that your little great dane was put down and that it could have been wild mushrooms that caused the reaction. Like you, I thought they at worst might make you sick so I'm sorry you went through this trajedy. And, that COVID-19 also affected your work with being a teacher and the remote learning.

Overall Comments
Overall, I found this to be a blog post that caught us up with your life and how things have been going. I'm sorry for what you've gone through and how this year has affected you. Hopefully, it gets better from here on out, or at least cross our fingers for it. Here's to wishing that better times will come and that the school year when it comes will be easier as well. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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