Hello hullabaloo22 ,

Congratulations on having completed the June portion of the Promptly Poetry Challenge! I'm cheering for you to complete the July portion too (and can already tell you're doing a great job!) so you can earn the exclusive merit badge prize!

Your title piqued my interest so I had to read your poem.

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed reading your poem and loved the ending. Overall, it felt mystical and magical.

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I loved your word choices.

Your alliteration flowed seamlessly in the poem and felt natural.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and kept my interest through every last word as I read it.

My favorite line was: "moonstrucj" (the last).

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

You did a great job with this poem's prompt and I suspect you'll excel in the contest.

CONCLUSION:
You wrote a beautiful and engaging poem that I greatly enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your magical creative writing with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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