Promptly Poetry Folder 2020-2021 [18+] Here's where I'll unlock my poetic muse for Lilli's weekly prompt. Gonna need this: ☕️ |
Hello Soldier_Mike , Congratulations on completing all of the June activities and qualifying for the July mini challenge in the Promptly Poetry Contest! I popped over to your portfolio's folder to see if there was something I wanted to review for my part of the mini challenge and this poem of yours caught my eye. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed your poem and loved how it told a whole story. You did a great job with the Promptly Poetry Challenge prompt for that week! MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: My favorite line was: "His porch-bound smile beams friendship earned." Your rhyming contributed to the good feeling of the poem's rhythm throughout. Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked a variety of strong feelings in me as I read it. I liked how you structured your poem. I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem. I liked the real-life feel to your poem. The ending brought me a feeling of relief. CONCLUSION: You wrote an enjoyable story poem that I greatly enjoyed reading. Well done! Thank you for sharing your neighborly poem with the writing.com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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