Hello rolandeld, Congratulations on completing all of the June activities and qualifying for the July mini challenge in the Promptly Poetry Contest! I popped over to your portfolio's folder to see if there was something I wanted to review for my part of the mini challenge and this poem of yours caught my eye. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed your poem and liked the thought-provoking questions it asked. You did a great job with the Promptly Poetry Challenge prompt for that week! MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: My favorite line was: "standing like a lonely guard before Buckingham palace," Your choice of free verse style was perfect for this questioning poem. Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked a variety of feelings in me as I read it. I liked how you structured your poem. I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem. I too wonder where the memories go. CONCLUSION: You wrote an enjoyable story poem that I greatly enjoyed reading. Well done! Thank you for sharing your existential poem with the writing.com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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