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Review of VOICES  
Review by ruwth
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


"I Write in 2020"  has me reviewing your item today! *Wink*

I really should learn to take a moment before I post to "I Write in 2020"  to check the genre of the entry I will be reviewing. I don't do horror.

That said, I read your story. It totally gave me the creeps and grossed me out.

The Grossest Line:

I stood there with blood on my face and a portion of her throat hanging from my mouth.


Disgusting!!!

I guess you certainly lived up to the genre... *Sick*

Technical Stuff;

Your creepy story was well written. The voices repeatedly pushing your main character was effective.

I am not sure how people used to horror/scary would respond but it was written well enough to gross me out!

Note to self: Check first next time!



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