Hi, Odessa Molinari , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "I Write in 2020" .

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the wind damage. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

I like: I like the interaction and conversation between the character because it revealed their personalities.

Suggestions: I encounter no distractions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .