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 Pain  [E]
Love and hurt
by Elexis LaFay
Review of Pain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a poem this "Pain" is! This wonderfully written by the writer Elexis LaFay. Here, the teller is a true lover but the whom the teller loves wholeheartedly is playing the love of the teller. Once, the person breaks tellers heart and again put them together. The teller also knows the mentality of the lover. So, he/she knows another heartbreaking attempt will come from the other side soon but the teller will never give any more chance.
This is a wonderfully written tiny emotional poem. Another thing that should be noted. There is not a single grammatical error. Keep writing.


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