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*Cherry* Well, I got no arguments with this. Cherries are the bomb! *Bigsmile*

Hi again, prettypoetry,

Now this is a short and sweet traditional rhyming poem that finds just the right words to end those lines well, and sticks to a strict 11-syllable count per line to help with the flow. The use of casual language makes it sweet and simple and relatable to those who are young at heart, who might even be nostalgic for the simpler things in life.

The poem was set up well describing the need for something very simply. And then, it gets to the visual reveal of salivating, on feet for some silly reason, to get the point across. And the final line is like the big reveal...cherries!

I can imagine another poem describing all the cherry confection that could be attained. Heck, you could link poems and create a series out of this love for cherries.

Thanks for the sweet treat, *Cherries*

Brian

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