Hello M0nsterRain ,

Welcome to writing.com!

Your "Nothing in Particular" piece was featured in my "read & Review" section and I enjoyed it so I thought I'd give you a "happy 20th anniversary to WDC" review!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Your piece is quite short but brings to mind a scenario I personally have never before thought to write about, even though it has happened to me before.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
It's amazing how such a short piece can inspire so many memories and thoughts.

Your biographical piece is concise.

You made me wonder what you had been staring at before writing this piece.

I liked how you structured your piece.

I can picture your line with an image being a meme on Facebook or something.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your piece.



CONCLUSION:
Good job!

Thank you for sharing your interesting biographical piece with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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