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  A time for patients  [E]
how to be a patient person
by princess
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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"A time for patients" is a very good writing effort, there is no doubt about it where the writer princess tells us how to be a patient person. According to writer's declaration, it is a short story but I do not agree with this. According to me, this is a nice Monologue. The characteristics of the writing are more suited to the Monologue.
Undoubtedly, this is emotional writing but this type of feelings are really impossible to an inexperienced person. The writer must observe life very closely and carefully. Nice attempt. Keep writing.

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