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 Thanksgiving Break Part 1  [13+]
Adam comes back to visit Chelsea, but doesn't find the same girl he left.
by Purple is House Florent
Review by Spring in my Sox
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Very romantic, it draws you in expecting conflict and only finding reciprocal affection. To be honest I'll be reading part two next to see what happens. I can't wait. the storytelling draws you in. I like the characters, the self-doubt for both of them.
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