Hello Cobwebby Space Reader Reindeer ,

I found your poem listed as the third place winner of the latest round of the 24 Syllables Poetry Contest (20 syllables right now for WDC 20th anniversary). Congratulations on your win! There's great competition in that well-loved contest!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and the musical scenario you painted with words.

You wrote a lovely poem that made me smile because of the extensive alliteration (I love alliteration).

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Your poem flows nicely and evoked the image of a smart and sweet cello player in my mind as I read it.

I think you did a great job with both the prompt word and the twenty syllable limit. I was surprised at how many people took a musical take on the prompt word. Even though I love music and didn't contribute to this round, my first thought with the "score" prompt was about sports.

Your syllable count was perfect.

My favorite part was that the player's name even added to the alliterative theme of your poem.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a lovely poem that I enjoyed. Good job!

Thank you for sharing your musical poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .