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Review #4569617
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 fantasy   [18+]
fantasy, drama
by taskmaster
Review of fantasy  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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That's a good start...Once upon a time... What happens next? Let me guess by giving you some idea...

First off, it's fantasy, drama and young adult. This could be tough.


...with sallow eyes and tattered, smelly clothes, an old man staggered onto the cobbelstone street where other beggars were fshining armor for a few crumbs. This man was missing a limb and did not approach anyone among those attending the daily market for alms. Stooped, with a hitch in his gait, he seemed to be looking for one particular purveyor. A small cart beyond the courtyard with an old woman at the helm seemed to straighten him up for a moment. When he finally managed to walk over, the woman acknowledged the visitor.
"Oh, you're back."
"Didn't think you'd get rid of me that easily, did ya?"
"Fine. You win," as she held out the amulet. He clutched it with his grubby hands and shaking, placed it around his well worn neck.

I could go on, but I'm not sure this is what you want. But, if you are looking for something to stimulate your goal of writing fantasy fiction, I offer this as as start and suggest the amulet turns him back into a young man. He's on a quest to finish a journey and each time he returns in whatever condition to get back the gem so he can undo a spell to get his life back or something he wants like power or whatever and it just goes on like that or whatever YOU were intending to do. *Laugh*

A bid a fond farewell and good writing to you,

Brian

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