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 A Meal to Remember  [XGC]
An erotic story
by Just Jill
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Rated: XGC | (4.5)
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Well good story; great because I'm doing the WDC birthday celebration right now.

I liked the story. The writing, the voice, is good. It seems professional. The visual effect was clear. I could possibly have used more character descriptions, but the visual effect was so well done that it left just the right thing to the immagination.

Speeling good, and the grammar looks good too.


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