My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing a newbie for the Angel Army Challenge for SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem talks about love and it's effects on one's soul.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the idea of love being eternal and than exploring that dynamic.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem.

MECHANICS

The poem is easy to read. The first line of every sentence is capitalized. I might suggest some punctuation, only in that would assist the reader with rhythm and flow.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked the opening line. It grabbed my attention right away.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

This is the type of poem that you can really expand, especially with the ocean comparison. Love is such a powerful topic for a poem. The ending could have had an ocean reference tying it back to the beginning.