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Review #4569829
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I Write In 2020  [E]
This book contains prose writings and poetry for various contests here on WDC.
by 💙 Carly
         Review for entry/chapter: "The Gift of 2020 " 
Review of I Write In 2020  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, 💙 Carly! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" . *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* This is a great piece, Carly! I really enjoyed this.
         *Bullet* A favorite line... to stay afloat on a sea of insecurity
         *Bullet* Another favorite... introverts with writing dreams
         *Bullet* And also, we are in this together
         *Bullet* I could keep going, but I'd have the entire poem on here! *Facepalm*
         *Bullet* Great flow and images.
         *Bullet* Very nice!


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* Line 3: it's anxiety *Right* its anxiety I know you know this! Just one of those silly typos! *Laugh*
         *Bullet* Everything else looks perfect!


Final Thoughts

         When I read a piece that flows so well, it feels like the words just fell into place for you. Sometimes that really happens, but most of the time, it doesn't, unfortunately! But either way, this is a great poem woven with positives in trying times. Great work!

Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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