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 Love Me  [E]
Something short and sweet on how to love me
by Elexis LaFay
Review of Love Me  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Elexis LaFay! I discovered this piece on the Newbies Work List. I also noticed you are very new to WDC! Welcome! I hope you are enjoying the site! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Great rhythm throughout this piece. *Smile*
         *Bullet* I like how you tell it like it is. No beating around the bush! *Wink* You know what you want and that's good! You don't want to waste your time on someone who isn't going to be there for you.
         *Bullet* This is almost got a lyrical feel to it, which I like.
         *Bullet* My favorite line: Don't make love to me then up and disappear.
         *Bullet* Good job!


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* Stanza 2, Line 1: through out *Right* throughout one word in this instance
         *Bullet* Your punctuation looks great, along with your spelling. Thumbs up! *Thumbsupr*

Final Thoughts

         Your title summary says it all: Something short and sweet on how to love me. You've got it exactly right! Great flow, too. *Smile*


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