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 | Snow Soup  [E] Snowed in with no food. Now what? [Cramp entry for 11/14/14].  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, Writer_Mike! I discovered this piece in Random Reviews. You wrote this in 2014? You've been here since 2008? How did our paths never cross till the past year or so?  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  Great story! I definitely understand Penny's anger. Especially with Edgar's laid back attitude.  Snow Soup is a great title! Doesn't sound like a great soup though.  Superb dialogue. Realistic. Did this happen to you, Mike???  Smooth, no typos, polished.  You are a good storyteller!Suggestions to Consider I have nothing for you as far as suggestions go. Good job!Final Thoughts I heard Colorado (or at least up near Denver) got some snow yesterday. Hopefully you went to the store beforehand. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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