My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

A look at death and a comparison of reading a good book, having a good end.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the comparison and how the poem compared life/death to reading a book.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There were no rhymes.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. If anything, I might suggest a light edit for puncutation to assist the flow of the poem. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "a young rose blooms then deteriorates."

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. Nice expression.