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 Pain  [E]
Love and hurt
by Elexis LaFay
Review of Pain  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Elexis LaFay ,

This is a poem that has the brave heart to tell it like it is about one who toys with affection. It's a poem about setting boundaries and finding strength, which makes statements to affirm newfound conviction.

The beauty of "Pain"  is its awkward nature. Revealing oneself and getting stronger as the lines at first reveal the pain and then divulge what will follow show a narrative from a point of view of one who plans on becoming a survivor.

This poem did like detail or visual images to give us a scene or characters, but it is still relatable and subject well read in these parts and among the fare that many might relate with.

This was straightforward and perhaps could use poetic devises and structure to lend to the overall theme. Or, it may be a poem that is just one part of a poetic journey to fulfillment. Time will tell.

Thank you for sharing this,

Brian

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