But she's always a woman to me....
Billy Joel

This poem "Invalid Item"  was very well described and related in traditional rhyming construct. I think this offering puts woman on pedestal and pays her homage as a saintly one with such elegance and intelligence. She's the whole package. That to me this is what your poem is about.

You did use tresses twice (golden and yellow) and eyes that are limpid, is there any other way to describe? That is one of the biggest poetry clichés out there. It can be difficult to top that one which has survived all the centuries. But, that is the style of word that one would use in a poem of this caliber.

A pleasure to lend feedback,

Brian



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