My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem is about a snow/winter queen who rules over a barren land.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem framed the life of the queen.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with no specific rythme scheme, but there are rythmes.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the dusty field, the muddy road, that garden had once been hoed." It paints a vivid scene in my mind as a reader.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice expression. I like the poem challenges the reader to think about the life the snow/winter queen led and fill in the blanks. I have no suggestions for improvement.