My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Review Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem tells a story of a woman visiting a palm reader.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it made me pause and read a bit deeper.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "if love could be fire-retardant like my flannel pajamas"

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice expression. For me, on the first read, the poem is fun, but on the second read, I saw a deeper meaning, especially in the last stanza with the cozy pajama hiding a deeper emotion underneath.